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Happiness is seclusion
In many a room one and the same;
Each has a bed, a window, a closet
And each protects me,
Shelters my feelings,
Allows me to inhale slowly.


Of course I cannot forget what is still
On the other side of that door
But a few moments in seclusion
Gives a break in the chaos
That refreshes the mind,
Suppresses the pain.


When I return here
A storm of memories blows through;
A comforting storm
That soaks the parched earth
Of my resolve,
Restores the security
I felt in those previous rooms;
Allows me to inhale slowly.

©2008-2009 =Shuuichi-chan
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We have to write a poem for English that has 20 lines and is about a retreat like in "Tintern Abbey" by Wordsworth.

I'd like to know if you guys think it is good or not and tell me what I should fix so I can feel safer about turning it in. xD Thanks in advance.
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